Gustaakh Ishq
Introduction
This weekend belongs to two Ishqs – one that has a ‘k’ in it, and the other that has a ‘q’ in it. The ‘k’ (Tere Ishk Mein) one boasts of a high dose of toxicity and wild swings that absolutely had me dazed for all the wrong reasons. But the ‘q’ (Gustaakh Ishq) one has the real charm of ‘Mohabbat’ that is a little ‘Gustaakh’ and even more ‘Naazuk’. The beauty of the new Hindi film Gustaakh Ishq remains on how it prompted me to use more of the words from the Urdu language in my daily life. There is an after taste of sweetness to the lines that automatically touch you through the beautiful shayaris that are sprinkled throughout the film. And being a closet Shayar (read: Poet) myself, the tenderness of the lines often had me in awe, even as I had my ‘Uff’ moments during the recitations. But it remains such a shame that the emotions around the old school romance that the drama wishes to present is a little hollow. It is like that chewing gum that is sweet at the start but gets increasingly blander in taste with every chew. As a result, I didn’t fully connect with the emotions here that were subtle, yes – but also buried within a second hour that increasingly feels scattered and abrupt by the passing minute. And that was such a shame for a film that felt beautiful at the start.
Story & Screenplay
Written by Vibhu Puri and Prasshant Jha, the tenderness in Gustaakh Ishq emerges from its setting that oozes of an old school charm. The narrow bylanes of Old Delhi in the year 1998 are home to an old printing press owned by Nawabuddin Saifuddin Rahman Rizvi ‘Salaam’ (Vijay Varma) where ‘Salaam’ isn’t a part of his name (something that becomes a subtly running joke in the film at some point). There is a hint of sweetness that cuts his melancholy given his love for poetry and shayaris, something that prompts him to search for yesteryear’s artist Aziz (Naseeruddin Shah), just so Nawab can publish his poetry in his newspaper to save his printing press. The underlying emotion remains of selfishness but the feeling is so gentle in the wake of the love for poetry that domimates the character of Nawab.
The drama initially focuses on the dynamics between characters really well – be it Nawab’s bittersweet relationship with his younger yet dominating sibling Jumman (Rohan Verma), or his sweeter glances with Aziz’s daughter Mannat (Fatima Sana Shaikh). Both these dynamics have a charm of their own – Nawab remains the understated character in each of these dynamics, often neglecting the domination of Jumman in the wake of love that he has for him, and deftly approaching Mannat who has stolen his heart through her glances, something that prompts him to be bear to her about his intentions and feelings while also stumbling upon her traumatic past. But the soul dynamic of the film remained the bond that Nawab shares with Aziz. The ‘Shagird’ was never portrayed so beautifully.
The proceedings are laced with poetry and stillness such that the emotions actually erupt from the softness of the shayaris. And the drama works best when the focus remains on Aziz and Nawab whose destinies and emotions remain intertwined, something that results in some memorable exchanges between the duo. But, it remains such a shame that the same kind of emotions are reduced to being hollow during Nawab’s moments with Mannat. As a result, my emotions felt like a rollercoaster given how it zoomed me in and out of the drama consistently. I wished for a little more stillness, a little more heart in a budding love story that did show a lot of promise to begin with. Or alternately, completely shifting the focus to the core dynamics of the film that did boast of a world building straight from a Sanjay Leela Bhansali film – with still frames and a peck of light seeping through that would give you an impression of a cold winter day in Delhi cut through by a hint of sunlight.
The issue for me starts in the second hour when the writing loses focus of the core conflict in play. It tries to be many things at once – a sibling rivalry featuring a generational gap and a difference of opinions, a love story that loses its objectivity given the lack of a central conflict, a master-shagird that still holds the base but let down by the inability to tap into the complexity of the conflict. As a result, the proceedings are abrupt too – character arcs are cut short with characters either disappearing or having an abrupt ending, some rather questionable plot twists that are injected only to add to the runtime even as the shayaris progressively dry up. It almost felt like an extended montage used to skip through important events rather than staying focused on the characters and emotions, that made this drama hollow towards the end, something that didn’t make me care enough for its characters despite a palpable conflict with respect to Aziz’s past. It felt like a cricket match in which the batters were in control only to lose their way towards the end, and in the process, the match too. I really wanted to like this film a little more given its ambition, but with the abruptness being a flaw, it did feel like a heartbreak. Guess this Ishq was Gustaakh after all, given how it squandered a good start.
Dialogues, Music & Direction
The urdu dialogues boast of a certain freshness that is a rarity in today’s times – particularly beyond the realms of the ‘Janaabs’ that we witness in a few Hindi films. There is so much more to the language than the word ‘Janaab’, and the same is beautifully reflected through the shayaris that absolutely had my heart here. And my urge to converse in Urdu was also a thing after the film. The music by Vishal Bhardwaj is beautiful, something that allows you to stay in the moment with its characters while wishing to hum its tunes on a cold winter afternoon. Sadly, the writing around the songs slightly flattens the impact that they would have otherwise. The one thing that did the film complete disservice was the BGM, particularly given how every little beat was enunciated by a background score. It felt distracting after a point and played a key role in disconnecting me from the story. That said, the cinematography comprises of visuals that are breathtaking with hints of stillness that do their bit in pulling you into this charming world, while keeping the aesthetics of the drama in check. The lighting and the haze perfectly engulf the spirit of the drama here, but alas it is the writing that lowers its impact.
The editing pattern is good to begin with but it progressively gets abrupt in the second hour (and also patchy), doing no real favours to the overall drama. Director Vibhu Puri doesn’t exactly land with his execution here. While his world building and characterization are superb, the one area where the director fails to have an impact is in the emotional core of the drama. Outside the shayaris, the drama is devoid of heartfelt emotions, even as the director loosens his grip in crunch moments of the second hour. This results in a drama that eventually falls of greatness, a huge disservice to the otherwise subject matter that felt beautiful at the start of the film stemming from regret, melancholy and second chances (for both Aziz and Nawab).
Performances
The performances are wonderful by the members of the cast. The likes of Faisal Rashid, Kamakshi Dewan, Keshav Sadhna, Jaya Bhatracharya, Lilliput and Natasha Rastogi manage to leave a mark despite a lesser screentime. Zain Khan Durrani has such a baritone voice that he uses to great effect in a subtly restrained but impactful role here. Rohan Verma as Jumman is a treat to witness given how he maintains a rhythm with the tone of his character. Sharib Hashmi as Attachi wonderfully sprinkled hints of humour to his character while also striving to extract some raw emotions towards the end. He is a phenomenal actor and he absolutely showcases a different range here. Fatima Sana Shaikh as Mannat is well restrained while having an impeccable screen presence here. But the impact of her performance is lowered given how sketchy her character was written to be, and that invariably skews the love angle of her character too.
There aren’t too many words to justify the performance of Naseeruddin Shah who was beautifully poetic as Aziz. Whenever he was onscreen, my attention never wavered even once even as his performance was laced with softness and restraint that gently engulfed an aching emotion within me. Vijay Varma as Nawab is immaculate as well, using his posture and body language to convey his emotions effectively. There is a sense of ambition to him that remains faint here, but the gentle streak of his personality is on display through his gestures and glances. Sadly, all these performances maybe lost as the words of a beautiful shayari in a book, just because the writing makes this drama flawed.
Conclusion
Gustaakh Ishq is an old-school romance laced with beautiful shayari but bland emotions that make this drama a bit of a mixed bag for me. While the world-building was beautiful, I would be lying if I were to say that the emotions landed perfectly. They didn’t, while also lowering the impact of the drama in the second hour due to some abrupt subplots. It is a drama that I really wished to love a little more, but alas! Even the ‘Chaand’ (moon) in the sky isn’t perfect…..Available in a theatre near you.